With rum and a dog
and Barbary Joe,
we set sail with a
Yo, ho, ho!
’Mid following wind
and isinglass seas,
we played on the pipe
and we took our ease.
Oh, one for the rum
and one for the dog
and one for Barbary Joe,
Yo ho!
’Twas first watch when
the storm blowed in,
and we set to work
with a clattering din.
Oh, one for the rum
and one for the dog
and one for Barbary Joe,
Yo ho!
The wind, she howled,
and the dog, he leapt,
as Barb’ry o’er the bow
was swept.
The rum went, too,
and down she sank,
and that was the last
that any of us drank.
Oh, one for the rum
and one for the dog
and one for Barbary Joe,
Yo ho!
Now, I’ve been dry
for many a year,
so I’ll sit by your fire
and have some cheer.
Give me one for the rum
and two for the dog
and three for Barbary Joe,
YO HO!
NaPoWriMo, Day 3 prompt: Write a sea chantey. To be honest, this one filled me with a little bit of dread when I first saw it. But it turned out to be pretty fun. The name “Barbary Joe” came into my head while I was cleaning this morning, and then most of the chantey wrote itself while I was walking to pick up my son at preschool. I’m guessing that motion helps when writing a chantey. Yo ho!
Also, many thanks to David J. Bauman (aka The Dad Poet) for his kind words about my Cummings-inspired poem from NaPoWriMo, Day 1. David is a great and very original poet himself, and he also does much to spotlight other poets’ work — particularly in sound. Plus, he’s funny. The same post where I’m mentioned also praises my poet-blogging buddy Jennifer Bullis. Her poems reveal a steady confidence and a fierce intelligence at work — and at play. One of the best things about NaPoWriMo is hopping around and visiting a lot of blogs — I urge you stop by and visit both David and Jennifer!
Nice job with this prompt — very rhythmic.
Thank you! I don’t often do much with meter or rhyme, so these challenges give me a chance to do something different.
Can I just say how maddening it is that everything you write seems to write itself?
I’m just kidding. It is fun when pen hits paper, and you are in that zone and everything just works.
I love your work!
Thanks, Liesl! And it’s not always so easy, I promise. Those two days in a row happened to be self-writers. I often struggle with endings.
Very nice tune & well done. It was out of my normal comfort zone too 🙂
Excellent! I found the same thing–I just accepted the first idea and the first name that came into my head and–voila!–the thing was on paper pretty quick. (Not sayin’ it’s any good, mind you!) This was a fun prompt!
Thanks! I found it more fun than I thought it would be. I’ll check yours out, too.
Haha, what a fun challenge. Nice job. And thank you for the kind words!
Thanks, David!
What a clever sea chantey–I like its narrative! And Marilyn, thank you for the glowing endorsement. Yo, ho!
Thanks, Jennifer! A narrative, rhyming sea chantey is certainly not something I would have written on my own — that’s what I love about NaPoWriMo.
wonderful fun. i got pulled into your effective rhythm.
Thanks, Jane! Rhythm isn’t usually my strong suit, but I could hear and feel this one.
Great fun and rhythm! And I love the name “Barbary Joe”. Cheers!
Thanks so much! It popped into my head almost like I was reading it on old sheet music.